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Am thoroughly enjoying the content I've been finding.

And this pre-dance picture of a 6' stud proves it.

On a night where you were having fun and all of a sudden you're "The guy that fucks goats"...

Unbelievable!

I'd like you guys to review it and critisise anything you find wrong with it.
I think I have a good start atleast? What all could I clean up; Aside from the repition of I?

Death's captive.Thanks, 111122223138 - aka pyro3138

: Third time i've copy-pasted this whole thing... hopefully the last.

Like I said, I'd greatly appreciate some of yen'z checkin it out and giving your opinion on it.

Since I can look this badass at work all day long

oh come on... you can't tell me you don't crack a smile when you see this

and an inability to spell right

and by "end of the world" i mean it's my 15th birthday...
: may god have mercy on your souls

come now...
what do you think of it? :3

So yeah, I like it: Thoughts?